I am away on leave this week, so writing this email early to follow up on last week's discussion about story arcs and storytelling. Pop back and check your inbox for that note if you have not yet read it.
Scott Adams in Win Bigly unpacks persuasion at a masterful level, so I thought I'd share some insights to help you.
Storytelling Insight #2 – Intriguingly, he suggests that all three of the three most powerful persuasion levers are, or have the potential to be, fear-based.
- The top motivator is a big fear. This suggests that if we want our decision-makers to move, we need to find a way to scare them into it. Naturally, this needs to be done carefully!
- The next most-effective motivator can be positive: belonging. This can be tricky to navigate in relation to stakeholder management and group think. How to add value to the conversation without following the herd and, equally, not being kicked out of it?
- The third most-effective motivator reverts to fear, but in a smaller scale. My hunch is that smaller fears are easier to use at work. However, as with anything: not too often or you dilute the effect.
The trick will be to get the tone just right. Going too far may come off as false and so become ineffective.
I hope that helps. More next week.
Kind regards,
Davina
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ABOUT AUTHOR: DAVINA STANLEY
Davina helps senior leaders and their teams prepare high-quality papers and presentations in a fraction of the time, nailing the message that engages decision makers fast.
She learned structured thinking at McKinsey in Hong Kong in the 1990s, was approved to teach the Pyramid Principle by Barbara Minto in 2009, and has coached leaders and teams globally for 25+ years. Clients report cutting review cycles by ~30% and prep time by ~20%.*
Recent clients include 7Eleven, KPMG, Mercer, Meta, and Woolworths.
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