Imagine 10 senior leaders or perhaps board directors sitting around the table spending 20 minutes debating the meaning of a single paragraph?
It would be annoying for them, but what does it really cost?
Hint: Better ‘writing' and better ‘paragraphs' aren't the answer.
The answer is to think strategically about your messaging and then craft it in a way that is easy to understand.
I'll unpack that a bit more here as well as invite you to next week's free Lightning Lesson on that topic.
The cost of that paragraph is higher than you think for you, your board and your organisation.
A whisker over 3 hours in time sunk around that table means poor quality outcomes for everyone:
- The company is unlikely to get a good decision, let alone a fast one
- The board spends less time adding real value
- The leader presenting it is mortified they missed it in their reviews and is sent off with more questions than answers
- The author is embarrassed and facing into preparing yet another presentation in the hope that this one meets the mark
And all from one poor paragraph.
So, what to do instead?
We need to dig more deeply than the ‘writing' and ‘paragraphs' to find and fix the root cause.
Sure, we can write better paragraphs.
But we need to ask WHY the paragraph was poor in the first place.
The real problem lies as much in the process as it does in the writing itself.
- Lack of clarity on what really needed to be said
- Too much ‘chain of pain’ editing
- Lack of true ownership of the narrative
- A leader reviewing either late at night or on the weekend too close to the due date.
The solution is to think, work and communicate more strategically.
>> Join next week's free Lightning Lesson to learn more.
I hope that helps.
Davina
Whenever you're ready, here are five other ways I can help you:
Elevate, the book – helps leaders set their teams up to set up a new dynamic across their team that will elevate everyone’s skills, helping the team get better, faster decisions.
Engage, the book – helps individual contributors prepare papers and presentations that leaders can approve without reworking.
Engage, the self-paced course – supports both individuals and leaders prepare more insightful papers and presentations for senior leaders and boards.
Extreme Clarity, the 2-hour workshop – introduces techniques for structuring your messaging.
Board Paper Bootcamp, the 2-week program – helps you clarify and convey complex ideas to senior leaders and boards.
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PRESENTED BY DAVINA STANLEY
I love what I do.
I help senior leaders and their teams prepare high-quality papers and presentations in a fraction of the time.
This involves ‘nailing' the message that will quickly engage decision makers in the required outcome.
I leverage 25+ years' experience including
- learning structured thinking techniques at McKinsey in Hong Kong in the mid 1990s before coaching and training their teams globally as a freelancer for a further 15 years
- being approved to teach the Pyramid Principle by Barbara Minto in 2009
- helping CEOs, C-suite leaders and their reports deeply understand their stakeholder needs and communicate accordingly
- seeing leaders cut the number of times they review major papers by ~30% and teams cut the amount of time they take to prepare major papers by ~20%*
- watching senior meetings focus on substantive discussions and better decisions rather than trying to clarify the issue
My approach helps anyone who needs to engage senior leaders and Boards.
Recent clients include 7Eleven, KPMG, Mercer, Meta, Woolworths.
Learn more at www.clarityfirstprogram.com
(*) Numbers are based on 2023 client benchmarking results.