In my art classes, we keep returning to one question: how do you make an image that has everything it needs and nothing more?
The same question came up with a client this week.
I was coaching a group of six data specialists and their manager. They wanted their communication to be clearer and more insightful.
We worked through a real example together, and by the end, the manager noticed something: the final version was much shorter and contained almost none of their original draft.
Why?
In his words, they needed to put down their own backpack of stuff and focus on what the decision-maker actually needed.
Here’s what changed. The new version …
- Fit on a single page, written for one specific reader: the manager's own boss. The team pushed back, but the manager was confident a single page was plenty for his 1-1.
- Explained why the work mattered, not just what the team had been doing. The original was full of detail that fascinated the team but didn't help the decision-maker decide anything.
- Gave them a foundation to build from. If the recommendation got support, a longer deck or doc could follow — for the people who'd actually need it.
So next time you sit down to prepare a deck or a doc, ask yourself: can I free myself from the mechanics of documentation and focus on the thing that actually matters: the thinking?
More soon,
Davina
Whenever you're ready, here are five other ways I can help you:
Elevate, the book – helps leaders set their teams up to set up a new dynamic across their team that will elevate everyone’s skills, helping the team get better, faster decisions.
Engage, the book – helps individual contributors prepare papers and presentations that leaders can approve without reworking.
Engage, the self-paced course – supports both individuals and leaders prepare more insightful papers and presentations for senior leaders and boards.
Extreme Clarity, the 2-hour workshop – introduces techniques for structuring your messaging.
Board Paper Bootcamp, the 2-week program – helps you clarify and convey complex ideas to senior leaders and boards.
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ABOUT AUTHOR: DAVINA STANLEY
I love what I do.
I help senior leaders and their teams prepare high-quality papers and presentations in a fraction of the time.
This involves 'nailing' the message that will quickly engage decision makers in the required outcome.
I leverage 25+ years' experience including
- learning structured thinking techniques at McKinsey in Hong Kong in the mid 1990s before coaching and training their teams globally as a freelancer for a further 15 years
- being approved to teach the Pyramid Principle by Barbara Minto in 2009
- helping CEOs, C-suite leaders and their reports deeply understand their stakeholder needs and communicate accordingly
- seeing leaders cut the number of times they review major papers by ~30% and teams cut the amount of time they take to prepare major papers by ~20%*
- watching senior meetings focus on substantive discussions and better decisions rather than trying to clarify the issue
My approach helps anyone who needs to engage senior leaders and Boards.
Recent clients include 7Eleven, KPMG, Mercer, Meta, Woolworths.
Learn more at www.clarityfirstprogram.com
(*) Numbers are based on 2023 client benchmarking results.







